poetry response 3

The Sick Rose by William Blake

a poetry response by Drew Bradley

 A peculiar poem indeed, a perplexing juxtaposition between a lover and a flower and the parasites that destroy both. A CHEATER he claims this women. As she is sick and in need of care, for "the invisible worm" has tainted her flower bed. This is a very enlightening poem on the simple and inevitable destruction of a rose and of relationships. So fragile and joyous the flower does seem, but so easy to manipulate, to overpower it seems. William shares a hint of anger and remorse over his wilting flower. Using an exclamation point in the first stanza indicates a dramatic reaction. Reference to a worm is the hint that lead me to believe it is also a reference to a bride or lover being wronged or violated, "found out thy bed" is a good representation of laying with the "worm" or the contracting of an illness. Such a peculiar poem to represent feelings of anguish or sorrow. I find it interesting, "his dark secret love" as he calls it, almost as if there was passion behind being overpowered by this worm. "Does thy life destroy" the hurt hes is feeling for his tainted flower, is a fine lie between the worlds of a simple rose and a passionate lover.

Overall i believe this poem to innate Williams relationships with women, more importantly a lover or bride, and the deceitful  natures of "worms" trying to taint his precious rose. A sad poem of heartbreak really.

poetry response 4

You Fit Into Me

By Margaret Atwood

Poetry Response

This wonderfully simple to the point poem gives a very blunt and fruitless description of when two people are simply not meant to be. The lines "you fit into me like a hook into a eye" not a pleasant comparison by any means. With such a simply spoken 4 line poem Margaret manages to convey her feelings toward an individual it such a dry and clear feeling towards another individual.

This form of simplistic writing is almost a flaunting of poetic skills. Using very little to emphasis a powerful feeling is a very hard skill to master. But I also believe Margaret did this intentionally as almost a show of how cut and dry her feelings are in this poem. Not wishing to go any further into the subject because she cares so little for the idea of it. Her distaste rings true in this poem; almost as if shes staring into your face rudely explaining why she doesn't like you. A very bland poem if you ask me, but bland is by no means tasteless, this poem is absorbed like a saltine cracker, salty quick to eat, not a whole lot to hide behind.

Then again from a completely different standpoint the phrase "you fit into me" could very well be literal. Bringing in some questionable gestures indeed. But a totally viable viewpoint. Margaret seeming almost very straightforward and rather gritty person could easily use suggestive descriptions in a painful and morbid manner.  This phrase could almost be an enticing allure in a very strange way; The wording of the second stanza using" a fish hook an open eye" to over emphasis the already described event, could give this a taunting or strained desire for a reaction. And since tension can be broken in the best of two ways in a face to face encounter, i can imagine Margaret getting ready to either slap the reader or kiss them furiously. 

I rather enjoy this poem. On the surface it looks like nothing more than the ramblings of a bar drunkard, but in a deeper understanding this can tell Margaret's manners, personality, way of handling situations, and even relationships if you had the evidence. Its far from being the simple shell of a poem it appears to be.    

Blog Post 21

In watching the short clip of "Apocalypse Now" i can see a number of parallels to the "The Heart of Darkness" such as the severe lack of care for the natives as the men fire at the beach. This as well as the mens attitudes towards the natives, watching them run, laughing, as if it were a sport. The colonels name Kilgore is a play on words referencing to his cruel and ruthless nature. As this is a depiction of "The Heart Of Darkness" it is to be expected, but the haunting visuals and clear misunderstanding of the two cultures is just as the book describes

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Well i cant say Ive done the best in this class over this first semester, but i have learned alot and grown a great deal as a person, i have learned my limits and that confidence can only get you so far in life, as well as the fact that you cannot carry the world on your shoulders and an insane amount of stress just causes mental and physical illness. The best way to live and learn though is through trial and error(at least for me that is) and i faced my trials and ive better myself because of it. I just hope my errors and desire to grow up too fast dont take too large a toll. Starting next semester with an open mind and an open body im going to do my best and straighten my priorities after all if i dont pass school im not going to be able to accomplish as much as id like in the coming years.

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The Great Gatsby was a great travel down memory lane as i read it in the eighth grade. But so much more was opened up to my understanding as I have grown older. This book has so many valuable lessons on life, and how easy it is to slip up and make a mistake. Through Gatsby i have learned to be careful of the past for it may repeat itself. As well as to pursue happiness and not those objects which are often filled in its place. Money,power,beauty, all so easy of a temptation,but so easily misunderstood;so easily misused by those seeking to fill a void. I plan on reading this book many more times in my life, and each time i will learn something new, for life is a never yearning for knowledge and understanding.

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History is bound to repeat itself if we as humans do not learn from our mistakes. Gatsby is a clear example of this, his use of persuasion and manipulation described in the events of page 116. Gatsby uses his false past in order to appear as a quality person in order to get what he wants. This follows deep into gatsbys desire for daisy which he is repeating from the past and trying to follow a path that has long since been gone.

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Gatsby chapter 3 read along Gatsby and his fabulous parties are the talk of the town. Nick is invited to Gatsby's most recent extravagant event. The party is a circus of drinking and entertainment, elaborate masks tailor the faces of uninterested guests. The party appears to just be a event for escape with the heavy references to drinking and escape Fitzgerald weaves into the event. Nick then meets Gatsby the man of mystery, the party guests have been referencing him all night as to build up the anticipation of his arrival to the reader. As well as the earlier party for Tom juxtaposed to the completely different party of Gatsby in order to even further emphasize its extravagance. As the party dies down people begin to leave with a single drunk gentlemen driving his automobile into a ditch, this uncomfortable situation sheds more light onto the idea that these people are still not happy and still go through everyday struggles being rich and famous. This idea that the American Dream is not bought is very prevalent in this chapter.

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This is my new favorite website!!!!!!!

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From the Socratic seminar on Dubliners, I finally found my strengths in the class(well at least with public speaking) and understood the analysis on a much deeper level when i openly spoke about it; i need to figure out how to incorporate this into my overall writing. But progress is good so I'll take it.

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Briuana Mittans "Blog Post 23" analysis of "Those Winter Days" by Robert Frost is a very well organised analysis that better helped my organization and formatting problems. While also being a very informative and unique perspective of Robert Frost. By organizing the response into sectioned paragraphs of the poems analysis helps me to better understand how to format. While also taking on a very different approach to Robert Frost; but such is the life of Biuana Mittan.

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https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1viop-lS4rpzNbsaeF_OBRXhxL1_vBD6HvDON5J4bCgA/edit?usp=sharing

This is the link to my literary terms donw with briuana mittan

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My College Essay

Over the course of my young life we have taken tumbles and triumphs, pecks and slaps, and been everything from a clown to a king; but the most important lessons have always revolved around believing in yourself no matter the odds.

What could possibly be better than a smile? You get a new bike for your sixth birthday; red ribbons chrome finish and just like dad tells you “It's fast so be careful.” You take it down the warm pavement, spring kissing your stride, riding your brand new freedom machine. Fingers tingling and heart ablaze you ride down the big hill on Cherry St; even though mom said stop you were suspended in the moment, this all new feeling that life was taking you somewhere. Still the hill’s always bigger than we think it is and that new adventure is in a  million pieces against old man Frank’s Volkswagen, but your heart’s cries outweigh those skinned knees; after all, the fall is always so much harder when it hurts that which we love. But no worries it won’t matter in 10 years right?

It’s ok to fail; no matter the peril, no matter the sorrow, no matter how you look at it; failure does not mean defeat. Everyone has fallen to the ground scraped an elbow, broken a heart, and lost something dear. Some turn to anger to find peace, some turn to drugs to find clarity, some love another in hopes to love themselves. But the true triumph in defeat, is learning to accept and learn from your mistakes.

You have to pick yourself up, you have to want to be happy. 9th grade just started and you’re going to ask out the new girl that lives next door, silky blonde hair,sky blue eyes and that gorgeous smile that rivals the setting sun. The whole day is planned, velvet roses, a ten times rehearsed speech, and pride on the tightrope you give it your all. But Colten was always more good looking than you and big surprise when she jumps into his arms and gets in the limo he rented. But that’s ok right? Because it’s not going to matter in five years right?

11th grade comes around the bend heavier with every stride. Dad loses the family business, mom doesn't love the new hubby, your best friend broke up with Mary Jane and is hitting on the Snow fairy. And you still have the constant ever wavering idea that you'll live together with all your friends and loved ones by gumdrop lake; with every twist and turn your brain flips upside down because you just realized Santa claus isn't real and there is no god. It's just not fair now is it? But everything will be just fine when you become an adult right?

It’s ok to fail; no matter the peril, no matter the sorrow, no matter how you look at it; failure does not mean defeat. Everyone has fallen to the ground scraped an elbow, broken a heart, and lost something dear. Some turn to anger to find peace, some turn to drugs to find clarity, some love another in hopes to love themselves. But the true triumph in defeat, is learning to accept and learn from your mistakes.

Reflection

This essay took alot of what kind of writing style i like to use and did pretty much a trip down memory lane. I had to take a step back and format this correctly though(which has always been my biggest problem.)

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This class is rather challenging, but I'm really enjoying it. Its testing my strengths and even more so my weaknesses, poetry responses and poetry analysis is proving to be my favorite part of the class. Id like to get better at the essays my formal written analysis gets too distracted i just need to take my speech and put it into words on paper......surprisingly harder than i thought it would be. Just need to not be so paranoid is all.....

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A Rose For Emily

This story intrigued me on the values and depictions  of a woman hitting one brick wall after another.  After the death Mrs. Roses soon to be husband she descends into this almost coma like being of a person. Foul smells from her home, staring out the window at night, completely away from civilization. Its maddening to think what she must be going through and gives the characters of the story a somber feeling of pity upon poor Miss Rose. She then begins to lose her mind, seeing her father again, her will as she becomes very ill, and her appearance as she cuts her hair and gains a ghostly complexion. The line "Poor Emily" is used throughout the story as an almost blatantly stated pity from the town too Miss Rose. As she died out slowly, lengthily, and painfully. like watching a beautiful rose slowly dry out from lack of water and sunshine.